Two attempts, both pathetic

I’m finding it hard to write a poem GAILY;
the words all seem pathetic and TRITE,
the opposite of being in the bounteous spaces of a HAREM,
more like trying the thickest dough to KNEAD.

GAILY? I’m finding it hard to write thus;
TRITE and pathetic is all the words seem – a
HAREM of bounteous words I’d like, not
KNEADing what appears to be unmalleable dough.

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